Task 4 My Short Film Treatment

Devils Paradise

Tom- This is one of the characters his age is 18 he smokes he tall and very lean and extremely dopey  his role is a person who is an under achiever who loves to party and chill out i made my character like this because he would suite the short film and would attract a large amount of audience.
Ian- This is the second character he is 18 years old he is 5ft9 and skinny he plays a role that includes a lot of sense of humour and he has the perfect role because he is naturally funny. He is very intelligent and handsome all the females love him. I chosen him for this role because he will attract a lot of women which then will bring loads of audience to come and see the film.   
Paul- This is the third character he is 18 years of age and 6ft1 and has a lean body his role is to be a deamond that is disguised as a human and he kills everyone one of his friends at the end of the trip but the most petrifying thing is his friends don’t know what he is up to so. What the audience’s prescription is going to be quite different to the actors because the audience know who the killer is this will make it more interesting for the audience and this is why i made my film like this.
Laura- This is Laura as you can see she is the only female in this film she is the oldest person of the 4 friends she is 19 years old 5ft12 lean beautiful body structure and very intelligent also she attracts a lot of men. This is why i chosen a beautiful girl that attracts males because it would make them come to see my film and bring and the audience will increase which is good for me and my production.  

The genre of this film is horror it includes 4 friends and one of them is a deamond. Their names are Tom, Ian, Paul, Laura. The story line is basically the four of them go on a road trip far, far away and one of them is disguised as a deamond and the rest of them don’t know who it is. They camp for a night at the forest near the river called Ferreira and 12 hours later they wake up and realize Liam has disappeared so they all get frightened they get back into the car and drive of they find the nearest motel which was 18miles away they get there half an hour later they rent a motel for the night and the next morning there was blood all over the floor and Laura and Paul get petrified and started shouting Tom, Tom he never showed up  he has disappeared so Laura grabs the car keys and Paul grabs there close they get back  in the car and zoom off back home they cool of in the car and really worried and Paul is just starring at Laura as she is driving. Paul speaks to her in a deeply voice and says ‘I killed Liam i killed Tom i am the murderer’ as he takes of his disguise Laura faints and Paul takes control of the car turns the banged up car and turns into the canal. Paul picks Laura up and ties her to a tree she wakes up after 1 hour and she starts to cry Paul has a conversation with her about what he is going to do to her Laura starts crying even worse Paul grips her throat and tares her throat off. And berry her under the ground. Paul realises he can’t go back on the road and with blood on his hands, face, shirt so he takes a bath in the canal gets back in the car and drives back to his college dorm and changes himself back to a human runs into his dorm room and takes a shower and gets changed in to his clothes then he runs in to 3 different people and makes friends with them..............
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